Question

造纸术不仅是中国古代的伟大发明，同时也促进了世界文明的发展。请根据下面表格里所提示的内容，以One of the Most Helpful Inventions为题写一篇短文。词数60-80之间。

Invention	Paper
Time	Western Han dynasty
Inventor	Cai Lun
Materials	bark, ropes, rags and so on
Uses	writing, painting, printing books and so on

One of the Most Helpful Inventions
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Answer 1

One of the Most Helpful Inventions
As we all know, paper is one of the four most important inventions in ancient China. It was invented in the Western Han dynasty by Cai Lun. After he had done many experiments. Cai Lun made paper with bark, ropes, rags and so on. It is a great contribution to the world.
Nowadays, paper is very useful in our work, study and daily life. We can use it to write, paint, print books and so on.
Thanks for the invention of paper. It has made our life more colorful.

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合表格中的内容完成这篇介绍造纸业的发展及对社会的重大贡献，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含发明项、发明时间、发明者及原材料和用途等几个方面进行陈述，表达出恰当的观点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了造纸技术对于社会的贡献及其发展，并包含了表格中所要求的基本信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含定语从句及被动语态的准确使用为文章增色不少.如As we all know，It was invented in the Western Han dynasty by Cai Lun，a great contribution to，made our life more colorful，and so on.学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。