Question

【题目】母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。

My mother:

1.Introduction(age /job/ability/hobby)

2.What she did for you

3.What you will do for her

My mother

We need love.We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study， even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up， I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly， I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most， I think.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。

写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。