Question

书面表达

有一种节约叫光盘，有一种公益叫光盘！所谓光盘，就是吃光你盘子中的食物。拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食！针对这项行动，并根据以下提示，请你以No Wasting On Food为题写一篇短文，号召大家参与这项活动。
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 词数：80左右。

Reasons	a waste of food, money,
	pollute the environment
	…
Suggestions	eat up all your food / clear your plate;
	leftovers（剩饭菜）…
	order less or smaller dishes
	…

No Wasting On Food
Recently, nearly 26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活动）against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           

Answer 1

Recently, nearly 26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活动） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.
I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity.
It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign.
First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later.
In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food.

解析试题分析：本文的写作比较好写，生活中的细节都可以指导我们来写。首先，对这次活动意义就行说明，进行总的概括，可以用I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity.来表达。然后对浪费造成的危害进行说明，根据题目的提示及自己的发挥如吃太多对我们的健康也是有害的eating too much is bad for our health.来表达。最后，对反对浪费我们应该如何做提出建议，可以用first,second third来进行分层说明，同时用一句话进行全文的总结In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food.
考点：提纲类写作
点评：在对于诸如此类文章的写作，学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型。如be good for,benefit,useful等单词短语。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采。