Question

青少年学生的安全备受社会关注。在全国中小学安全教育宣传日来临之际, 《21世纪英文报》请你以“How to Keep Us Safe” 为题，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈青少年学生应该如何保障自身的安全。
提示：(1) What should you do at home?
(2) What should you do on the way to school?
(3) What should you do at school?
要求：(1) 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3) 词数：60～80个。（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
How to Keep Us Safe
Safety is important to us all. As teenagers, we must learn to protect ourselves. ________________________
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                

Answer 1

Let’s take good care of ourselves to keep happy and safe. 
One possible version:
How to Keep Us Safe
Safety is important to us all. As teenagers, we must learn to protect ourselves. 
When we stay at home, we should be careful with the electricity and the gas. Do remember to turn them off after using them. We’d better not play with fire or knives. They may hurt us.
On the way to school, it’s important for us to obey the traffic rules. If we go to school by bike, we should never ride too fast. It’s dangerous.
What about at school? We should pay more attention to doing sports safely. We also mustn’t run after each other after class.
Let’s take good care of ourselves to keep happy and safe.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，而且提供材料充分详细。我们要做的就是用地道且完美的语句将这些内容表达出来。根据写作的基本步骤，在认真详细审题的审题之后。先在心中打好腹稿，确定本文的人称（根据问题要求，应为第一人称），时态（现在时为主），要点（共三个必写要点），然后再动笔。在不遗漏要点的基础上，适当加以发挥和选取精美的结构和语句。根据材料提供的内容可知，由于本文属于一篇叙述加说明性文章，应选取一般现在时，人称采用第一人称来陈述和说明。在写作中注意开头和结尾的设计。不同信息之间应采用合适的连词，保证文章浑然一体，可读性强。
【亮点说明】这篇文章在开篇使用了be important to sb, us all, 以及learn to do，使读者感到作者的语言功底还是很深的。在中间段落关于如何保持安全的说明中，作者先后运用了强调结构Do remember to turn them off after using them，形式主语it’s important for us to obey the traffic rules.条件状语从句If we go to school by bike, we should never ride too fast.看出作者思路的清晰以及灵活自如地去组织语言的能力。最后一段言简意赅发出号召，意味深长。可见，在平时的日常学习中，注意总结和扎实基本功对写作是至关重要的。