Question

假设你和你的朋友上周日一起到万绿园(Wanlv Garden)游玩, 请根据表格内容，以 “A Happy Trip”为题，用英语写一篇小短文在英语课上向同学汇报。

要求：短文须包括所给内容， 可适当发挥，70词左右。

Weather	sunny
When	last Sunday
How to go	by bus
What to take	football, a camera, some kites, some water…
What to do	1. ride bikes 2. talk with each other 3… 4…
Feeling (感受)	…

A Happy Trip

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A Happy Trip

Last Sunday, my classmates and I had a happy trip to Wanlv Garden. It was sunny. In the morning, we met at the school gate and went there by bus. We got there at about nine o’clock. We took a basketball, a camera, some kites and some water there. After we got there, we rode bikes, flew kites and played football. After that, we had a rest and talked with each other happily. I took many photos for them. At about twelve o’clock, we had lunch near Wanlv Garden. We were all happy.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们记叙上周日和朋友去万绿园游玩的事情，在表格中给出了我们具体的内容，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容翻译出来，并使表达流畅。通过审题可知，这篇短文描写的是上周日的事情，故全文都应该用一般过去时态，因此要注意每句话中的谓语动词，都要用过去式的形式，尤其是不规则动词的过去式，如get, take, have 等。写作时要注意将表格中的所有要点都表达出来，不要有遗漏。关于对这次游玩的感受，我们需要用自己的话来补充。另外还需注意使用连词和好的句型，使整篇文章流畅、完整。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文。作者按照题目要求，将自己和同学去万绿园游玩的事情完整的表达了出来，叙述很有条理，也很完整，包括了所有要点。尤其是注意了这篇作文应该使用的时态，都是过去时，所以每句话中的谓语动词都用过去式的形式。在这一点上，作者做得很好，没有出现错误。文章中也用到了一些好的句式，如my classmates and I had a happy trip to Wanlv Garde、After we got there, we rode bikes, flew kites and played football、I took many photos for them.等。

考点：提纲类作文。