Question

18．假如你是刘梅，你的英国笔友Jack 给你写信说他最近总感觉身体不舒服．请你根据以下要点提示，写一封80词左右的回信．
提示：1多休息，多锻炼．
2听听音乐．
3保持均衡的饮食（keep a balanced diet）．
．Dear jack，
                                                           
Yours，
Liu Mei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In my opinion，you can listen to some light music to help lower your stress．
句中涉及的短语有："in one's opinion  依某人的观点"、"help do sth  帮助做某事"．这句话意为：在我看来，你可以听一些轻音乐帮助减轻压力．
高分句型二：
I'm sure you'll feel better soon．
句中"you'll feel better soon"为宾语从句．这句话意为：我确定你很快会感觉好一点儿．

解答 Dear Jack，
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well recently．Here is some advice for you．（开篇点题）Firstly，you should have a good rest．You shouldn't stay up late．Go to bed earlier to get a good sleep．Secondly，you should spend more time doing exercise like running，swimming and ball games．In my opinion，you can listen to some light music to help lower your stress．【高分句型一】Finally，I think you should keep a balanced diet．For example，you can have some fruits，vegetables and other healthy food every day．They are very good for your health．（提出建议）
I'm sure you'll feel better soon．【高分句型二】（表达祝福）
Yours，
Liu Mei

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．