Question

20．随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过低碳生活．请写一篇英语短文，倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族．要点如下：
1．节约用水、用电、用纸；
2．去超市自备购物袋；
3．不要购买没必要的衣服；
4．不要购买一次性的杯子和碗筷；
5．步行或骑自行车上学．
注意：1．词数80词左右．（开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数．）
       2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing green house gases．As students，
we can choose to live a low-carbon life，too．In our daily life，we should save water，electricity and paper．Remember to turn off the water tap or reuse water．We're supposed to use both sides of the paper．We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room．We can bring our own shopping bags when we go to the supermarketDon't buy unnecessary clothes because it is a kind of waste．Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks which can be used only once．If possible，we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．
Let's take action and be a low-carbon people!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容为倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族．时态为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从五方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1．节约用水、用电、用纸；2．去超市自备购物袋；3．不要购买没必要的衣服；4．不要购买一次性的杯子和碗筷；5．步行或骑自行车上学．
常用到的重点句型和短语：remember to do sth记得去做某事，be supposed to应该，if possible如果可能的话，had better do sth最好做某事等

解答 答案：
     With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．As students，we can choose to live a low-carbon life，too．（节约用水、用电、用纸）In our daily life，we should save water，electricity and paper．Remember to turn off the water tap or reuse water．We're supposed to use both sides of the paper．We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room．（去超市自备购物袋）We can bring our own shopping bags when we go to the supermarket．（不要购买没必要的衣服）Don't buy unnecessary clothes because it is a kind of waste．（不要购买一次性的杯子和碗筷）（高分句型）Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks which can be used only once．（步行或骑自行车上学）If possible，we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．
     （号召）Let's take action and be a low-carbon people!

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．