Question

【题目】Look at the pictures blow. Write at least 60 words about them on the topic “A/A present.”(看下面的图片，以“一件---的礼物”为题写一篇不少于60词的作文，标点符号不占格)

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他信息，否则不予评分）

The following is for reference only. (以下内容仅供参考)

Strange door Precious empty Excited note

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Answer 1

【答案】A Precious Present

Sending their children to the school , Mrs Jones drove home. She opened the door and sat at the table to enjoy a cup of coffee for the free moment. Suddenly she noticed a strange box with beautiful silk knots lying on the floor. She held the box and wondered what was in it. Was it an empty box just a joke from her families, or was there something precious in it? With all the confusion, she untied the box. There was a note in it. She sat down and read, “Dear mommy, many thanks for all the good things you have done for Jane and me. We would like to take this opportunity to express our great appreciation for your hard work. Happy Mother’s Day!” How excited the mother was! In the box ,was the most beautiful flowers in the world. All the doubts were solved. It was the Mother’s Day today.

【解析】

本篇为看图作文，要求按照图片提供的信息，以A/An present 为题，写一篇作文。

1.题干解读：本篇是看图作文，首先要仔细观察每一幅图中女子的表情和动作等，注意图片中的盒子是故事发展的线索，根据线索设计故事发展情节和结尾，据此把题目补充完整。本篇是故事，叙述过去的事情，主时态是一般过去时。书写时要注意发挥想象力，充分利用所给的提示词，使故事内容完整合理。