Question

19．假定你是李华，你的外教Mr．Frank回国前向你推荐了American School Life网站，希望你借此提高英语水平．请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的收获，要点如下：
1 表达思念；
2 上网收获；
3 表示感激．
注意：1 词数100词左右；
2 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Frank，
It's a fairly long time since you left our school．I miss you very much．Is everything going well？
The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）Now I has become more interested in English．Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．Now I can express myself much better than ever．
Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇应用文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be beneficial to对…有益；broaden my horizon拓展了我的视野； become   interested in对…感兴趣；Besides另外；Thanks to幸亏，由于；look  forward to 盼望；
The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）
It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）
  Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Frank，
      It's a fairly long time since you left our school．I miss you very much．Is everything going well？
      The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）Now I has become more interested in English．Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．Now I can express myself much better than ever．
     Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 （一）表达慰问：好久不见，近来可好？
常用句式：
It's a fairly long time since …自从…已经有很长一段时间
Leave someplace            离开某地  
成句：It's a fairly long time since you left our school．
补充：
1）我非常想念您．
I miss you very much．
2）表示问候．
Is everything going well？
（二）感谢原因一：你给我推荐的网站对我帮助很大．
有用句式：
sth．is beneficial to      …很有用
recommend             推荐
成句：The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．
补充：
网站上有很丰富的阅读材料，极大地开阔了我的眼界．
abundant  丰富的
greatly 极大地
broaden one's horizon 开阔眼界
成句：It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．
    现状：
现在我对英语更有兴趣了．
be interested in对…..有兴趣
成句：
Now I has become more interested in English．
感谢原因二：我还交了很多新朋友，还谈了很多关于学校生活和文化科学的内容．
Besides/what's more/Also此外（表过渡）
Make many new friends交到很多新朋友
补充：
communicate a lot  谈论了很多
句子整合：Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．
     现状：
现在我能更好地表达自己．
Now I can express myself much better than ever．
（四）重申感谢：多亏了您的关心，我在英语学习上取得很大进步．
Thanks to    多亏
Kindness and consideration   关心
Make rapid progress  取得很大进步
成句：
Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．
补充：
Owe to…归功于
Look forward to…
成句：
I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
我现在取得的成绩全仰赖您，期待您能给我更多的建议．