Question

14．假定你是李华，最近收到了你的英国朋友Jacob的来信，得知他已经考上了一所名牌大学．请你写信向他表示祝贺，并就你在大学专业选择上遇到的困惑征求他的意见．信的内容包括：
1向 Jacob 表示祝贺；
2谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑；
3向对方征求意见和建议．
注意：1词数 100 左右；
2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jacob，
Having heard from you，I'm writing to extend my warm congratulations to you，because you have been admitted to a famous University．（高分句型一）
As for me，I suffer from confusion when choosing my major．Initially，what I'm concerned about lies in whether the major will be suitable for me．Additionally，I prefer the one that is beneficial to my career prospects，instead of so-called popular major．（高分句型二）
To avoid making my decision blindly，I expect you to recommend some practical proposals to me，including analyzing the advantages and disadvantages of a certain profession．（高分句型三）I would appreciate it if you can do me a favor．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇写作属于书信类--求助信，要求考生掌握书信的格式，并有良好的语言运用能力和补充 细节能力．注意在写作过程中明确地分段使文章具备合理的逻辑关系，包含所给要点信息，即表达谢意，面临问题，寻求帮助．如果想达到 21-25分一档作文的标准，必须丰富语法结构，尽可能使用高级词汇．
【范文精讲】
开头两句写表达祝贺及原因，使用了 Having  heard  from  非谓语作状语，because  引导的原因状从两种高级语法，
extend（表达），be admitted to（被录取）两个高级词汇．
正文第一部分交代了面临的问题，重点在于补充的内容．使用了 when choosing my major 状从省略，what I'm concerned about lies in whether the major will be suitable for me．主语从句加表语从句，the one which is beneficial to my career prospects 定语从句三种高级语法，陈列事例时用 initially 和 additionally 替换了老套的 firstly，secondly．词汇方 面使用了 suffer from，confusion，be concerned about，lie in，be suitable for，be beneficial to，prospect．
正文第二部分侧重征求意见，使用了不定式作状语 to avoid，if 引导的条件状语从句以及 blindly，recommend，practical proposals 等高级词汇．
结尾为常规类书信企盼回复．

解答 Dear Jacob，
      Having heard from you，I'm writing to extend my warm congratulations to you，because you have been admitted to a famous University．（高分句型一）
      As for me，I suffer from confusion when choosing my major．Initially，what I'm concerned about lies in whether the major will be suitable for me．Additionally，I prefer the one that is beneficial to my career prospects，instead of so-called popular major．（高分句型二）
      To avoid making my decision blindly，I expect you to recommend some practical proposals to me，including analyzing the advantages and disadvantages of a certain profession．（高分句型三）I would appreciate it if you can do me a favor．
      Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．