Question

阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Social Practice

Social practice has been more and more popular in schools. Senior school students are asked to enter society and get some ideas of it. Surely, social practice has many advantages. Firstly, social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people. In this way students can gain some precious social experience, which will be useful to their future career. Secondly, students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work, thus knowing themselves more clearly. Thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.

However, some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example, some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn more money, thus neglecting their studies. And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future values.

In order to carry out social practice smoothly, students should first know their objective. They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement(补充), so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.

【写作内容】

1. 请以约30个词概括上文的内容;

2. 请以约120个词谈谈你对“社会实践”的看法，包括如下要点：

(1) 谈谈社会实践的重要性;

(2) 你或你朋友所经历过的一次社会实践;

(3) 你认为如何协调好学习与社会实践的关系。

【写作要求】

1. 可以用事例或者其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直 接引用原文句子;

2. 作文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Social practice enriches students’ social experience , put their knowledge into practice and rewards them with money. However, it may affect their studies and values. Therefore, students should balance their studies and social practice. (35words)

Undoubtedly, social practice benefits students in many ways. Nowadays, more students have opportunities to join in various social activities, such as military training, voluntary work in a community service, a part-time job in a super-market, from which learn how to serve, how to cooperate and how to solve problems. Gradually they will become strong-willed, kind-hearted and enthusiastic in study and life.

Two years ago, I organized a team of classmates to a Charity House where orphans and the disabled live. There we told stories to the blind; we drew beautiful pictures for the deaf; we helped friends in the wheelchair go around. It was the visit that made me realize that helping others should not be only an empty talk and that life is worth cherishing.

Of course, we must strike a balance between study and social practice, never allowing social activities to take priority over schoolwork. After all, senior school stage is a vital period for students to obtain knowledge and get prepared for their future. Therefore, I strongly suggest that we make full use of our spare time and holiday to participate in that. Only in this way can we refuse to shut ourselves in the campus.

 

【解析】

试题分析：本篇读写任务要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文，首先要用大约30个词概括所给文章的大概内容，然后用大约120个词谈谈对“社会实践”的看法，包括如下要点：(1) 谈谈社会实践的重要性;(2) 你或你朋友所经历过的一次社会实践;(3) 你认为如何协调好学习与社会实践的关系。因为属于论说性文章，所以在谋篇布局时可以考虑三段式的写作模式。而且还可以使用事例来论证自己的观点，增强文章的说服力。也可以使用文章所给内容但是不能照抄原文句子。在论述时还要使用过渡句和连接词来使文章内容具有层次性和逻辑性。此外写作时要尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式结构，比如定语从句，强调句型等等以增加文章亮点。

【亮点说明】在本篇范文中作者开头用三句话大约30个字概括了所给文章的内容，然后提出自己的观点：Undoubtedly, social practice benefits students in many ways.，在用一个事例进行论证。最后提出要保证学习和社会实践之间的平衡。这种段落安排符合论述文的要求，而且使文章结构清晰，层次分明。在语言方面作者使用了大量的复合句和短语结构，显示了作者对语言结构的把握，同时增加了文章的采分点。比如动词短语strike a balance，have opportunities to do，非谓语短语never allowing social activities to take priority over schoolwork.，倒装句Only in this way can we refuse to shut ourselves in the campus.等，总之这是一篇值得借鉴的优秀范文。

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