Question

16．假定你是李华，正在一所美国学校学习英文．你对学校中国艺术俱乐部 （Chinese Art Club） 很感兴趣，决定申请加入．现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信，内容如下：
1、表示有意加入；  2、介绍自己绘画特长；  3、说明性格优势； 4、期待满意答复．
注意：①词数：100左右；
②可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③文章起始句和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir/Madam．
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English courses at our school．
I'm interested in Music Club at Weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（表示有意加入）
I'm good at playing the piano．I have been playing the piano for more than ten years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing competition．【高分句型一】Also I can sing Chinese folk songs very well．（介绍音乐特长）As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．【高分句型二】（说明性格优势）I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club!Looking forward to your reply!（期待满意答复）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li  Hu．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封申请信．根据题目要求可知用用第一人称叙述，时态是以一般现在时态为主．内容包括：1、表示有意加入；2、介绍音乐特长；3、说明性格优势；4、期待满意答复．
高分句型：
1．I have been playing the piano for more than ten years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing competition．
句子里 have been playing 是现在完成进行时，表示"我一直在练琴"；more than 表示"超过"．
十多年来，我一直在练琴，我曾经在全国比赛中得了第三名．
2 As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．．
句子里As for 表示"关于，至于"；above all表示"最重要的是"．
至于我的性格，我自认为是思想开放的，友好的，容易相处的，最重要的是，我真的喜欢和来自全世界的人交朋友．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam． 
       I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English courses at our school． I'm interested in Music Club at Weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（表示有意加入）
      I'm good at playing the piano．I have been playing the piano for more than ten years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing competition．【高分句型一】Also I can sing Chinese folk songs very well．（介绍音乐特长）As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．【高分句型二】（说明性格优势）I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club!Looking forward to your reply!（期待满意答复） 
        Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li  Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．