Question

每年五月的第二个星期日是母亲节。母亲节到来之际，为了表达对天下母亲的崇高敬意，请你以为母亲节为话题，写一篇约120词的作文。

[写作内容]

要点：1. 节日时间和意义

2. 回忆一件母亲做的让你印象深刻的事

3. 今年的母亲节你打算如何做

[写作要求] 作文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Mothers’ Day falls on the second Sunday of May, with the purpose of showing children’s gratitude towards their great mothers.

Mother’ Day is a good time for me to respect and love my mother. I still remember the most impressive thing she did for me. One night, I suddenly fell ill. Unluckily, my father was away from home and it was raining heavily. Seeing I was felling terribly uncomfortable, she carried me on her back and rushed me to a near clinic without any hesitation. In order to protect me from rain, she got almost wet to the skin.

With the great day coming soon, I have been preparing for it for a long time. I am going to make a special cake, with a little note on the top, describing everything she has done for me since I could remembered things, which is filled with her devotion and love for me.

【解析】

试题分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必须按照要求在作文中覆盖试题规定的所有内容要点，完成试题任务，达到预期的写作目的。在写作时，考生应该留心是否要点完整，是否有要点遗漏。在题示要点完整的前提下，考生可以作文材料为中心进行适当地发挥，适当补充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。