Question

17．请你写一封倡议书，内容如下：
1．倡议同学为灾区儿童捐赠二手书；
2．说明此举的可取之处．

注意：1．词数：80左右，题目已为你写好；
   2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．
A Proposal
My fellow students，
These days，it is frequently reported that students in the disaster-hit areas are desperately lacking educational resources．
…
So，my dear friends，I sincerely hope that you will support my proposal and join us．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息写一封倡议书，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：倡议同学为灾区儿童捐赠二手书；说明此举的可取之处．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：call for号召，呼吁；What's more，而且；are of great use 非常有用；in the process of在…的过程中；
In a word总之，take part in参加；
By donating the books you have used，you can help the new senior 3 students save money．（高分句型一）
They can get a better understanding of their subjects in the process of referring to these notes．（高分句型二）
 Those who are interested in taking part in this voluntary activity can deliver their books to the office of the student Union On June 12th 2017．（高分句型三）

解答 A Proposal
My fellow students，
        These days，it is frequently reported that students in the disaster-hit areas are desperately lacking educational resources．A voluntary donating activity is called for here．Your second-hand books are wanted．By donating the books you have used，you can help the new senior 3 students save money．（高分句型一） What's more，the valuable notes in your books are of great use to the new senior 3 students．They can get a better understanding of their subjects in the process of referring to these notes．（高分句型二） Also，donating books can fill us with happiness．In a word，this voluntary activity can benefit both givers and receivers．Those who are interested in taking part in this voluntary activity can deliver their books to the office of the student Union On June 12th 2017．（高分句型三） Thank you!
     So，my dear friends，I sincerely hope that you will support my proposal and join us．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Students'Union
                                                                                                                                                                                                            May 5th，2017

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．