Question

5．Some students participate in school activities such as clubs and sports．Other students do not take part in such activities because they spend more time on their studies．
You are going to write an essay：Is it better to participate in school activities for middle school students？
Write no more than 150 words．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于读写任务类作文，根据提示信息针对"Is it better to participate in school activities for middle school students？"这一话题开展讨论，大家发表了不同的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从支持和反对两个方面来讨论该话题 2、要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写  3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：participate  in参加；be beneficial to对…有益；，however然而；In my opinion以我的观点来看；Finally最后； take the place of取代；
By going in for such activities，they can learn what they can't learn from books，which will be beneficial to them in the future．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，every student should engage in some after class activities because from these activities we can learn many valuable things that we won't learn in classrooms．（高分句型二）
Finally，after class activities broaden our circle of acquaintances．（高分句型三）

解答 Some students like to participate actively in after class activities．They think after class activities are an integral part of school life．By going in for such activities，they can learn what they can't learn from books，which will be beneficial to them in the future．（高分句型一）
     Others，however，don't like after class activities at all．They think that a student's work at school is learning theoretical knowledge and nothing else．Taking part in after class activities is a waste of the valuable time at school．
      In my opinion，every student should engage in some after class activities because from these activities we can learn many valuable things that we won't learn in classrooms．（高分句型二）School is not just a place for learning the difference between"lie"or"lay"，or what caused the hours of the daily schedule．Finally，after class activities broaden our circle of acquaintances．（高分句型三）No amount of ordinary school work can take the place of friends acquired in the informal familiarities of activities．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．