Question

13．我校路口是个交通极其复杂的地方，每天上下学非常拥堵．本周为交通安全周，作为学生会主席，请你以"Road Safety"为题，写一篇国旗下的演讲稿，呼吁学生遵守交通规则，重视交通安全．（字数：120-150）
提示：（1）交通安全现状及重要性   （2）列举相关交通规则
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Answer 1

分析 本篇要求写一份交通安全的演讲稿．写作时注意把提示内容写到位，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，再加以丰富．运用一般现在时态，人称为第一、第二人称．要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
重要短语：
 traffic rules，交通规则；fall down，滑倒
高分句子：
1．When you ride a bike，keep to the right side of the road．本句前半句为when引导的时间状语从句，丰富了句子结构．
2．Always obey these rules，you'll find it much safer to walk or ride on the road．本句为祈使句，后半句包含了省略that的宾语从句．

解答 Every year a lot of people are killed or injured in road accidents．The road outside our school is crowded．（提出现象）How can we make the roads safer？
       As a student，we should remember the following traffic rules．
      When you ride a bike，keep to the right side of the road（高分句型）．Don't cross the road or turn left at a red traffic light．Give a hand signal if you want to turn or stop．Before crossing the road，stop and look both ways，right and left．If the road is clear，it is safe to cross．The correct way to cross is to walk quickly，but not to run．If you run across the road，you may fall down（列举交通规则）．
      Always obey these rules，you'll find it much safer to walk or ride on the road（高分句型）．Let's build a safe school together（提出呼吁）．

点评 提纲类作文要求将给出的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当发挥想象．仔细而认真地研究提示是写好提纲作文的关键．只有理解了提示的含义，才有可能抓住要点，明确主题，有效地组织与主题有关的素材．