假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增如:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增如：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Traditional Chinese culture is facing extinction because of the developing society．As a result of，China is spare no effort to protect it．The protection of national culture is not only of great significant to Chinese cultural diversity but also to the harmoruous development between local economy and society．Which is reported，special attention has paid by the Cuangdong govemment in order to protect Chaoju（潮剧）．
In my opinion，some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture efficient．To start with，we should make a law to protect traditional culture．Otherwise，we should draw more people's attention to them．The more they know about the impmtance of culture protection，the strong support we can get from the public．
In the word，it is high time that we should treasure our own valuable culture．

分析改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

解答 Traditional Chinese culture is facing extinction because of the developing society．As a result of，China is
                                                                                                                             去掉of
spare no effort to protect it．The protection of national culture is not only of great significant to Chinese
sparing                                                                                                       significance
cultural diversity but also to the harmoruous development between local economy and society．Which is
                                                                                                                                   As
reported，special attention has∧paid by the Cuangdong govemment in order to protect Chaoju（潮剧）．
                                        been
In my opinion，some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture efficient．To start with，we
                                                                                                       efficiently
should make a law to protect traditional culture．Otherwise，we should draw more people's attention to them．
                                                  Besides/Futhermore/Additionally                                                 it
The more they know about the impmtance of culture protection，the strong support we can get from the public．
                                                                                            stronger
In the word，it is high time that we should treasure our own valuable culture．
     a
1．去掉of as a result of意为"由于、因为"，为介词短语，其后常接表示原因的名词性词组，而as a result意为"因此"，其后常接表结果的句子，故此处应去掉of；
2．spare-sparing 该句意为"中国正不遗余力地保护传统文化"，由China is 可知该句应使用现在进行时，故应用sparing替换spare；
3．significant-significance   significant为形容词，意为"重要的"，significance 为其名词形式，本题考查固定搭配"of+抽象名词=形容词"，故应使用名词形式significance，若去掉of，则必须同时去掉great或将great改为greatly，这种改法不符合题目要求；
4．Which-As    本题考查非限制性定语从句，由which引导非限制性定语从句只能谓语先行词后，而由as引导非限制性定语从句位置灵活，可以位于先行词前，也可位于先行词后，故此处应用as；
5．has 加been    固定搭配pay attention to 中动词pay 与attention存在动宾关系，而在该句中special attention作主语，故谓语应使用被动形式，即has been paid；
6．efficient-efficiently 此处表达"有效地保护传统文化"，应使用副词efficiently来修饰动作protect，作状语；
7．Otherwise-Besides/Futhermore/Additionally   由前一句中to start with"首先"可知，此处应使用besides/futhermore/additionally"此外、另外"，而otherwise"然而、否则"表示转折，在此处与前一句逻辑关系不正确；
8．them-it 此处"我们应该让人们关注的"是traditional Chinese culture，为不可数名词，故应用it来指带；
9．strong-stronger 该句使用固定搭配"the+比较级…，the+比较级…"表示"越…，越…"，故strong应使用比较级；
10．the-a in a word为固定搭配，意为"总之、简而言之"，是对前面所述的总结．

点评考生在做题时需理清文章的事理，注意词性、语态、时态的转换，分析句子结构．

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