Question

Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 
2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 
3．我的建议

Answer 1

Nowadays, online shopping has gained great popularity among more and more web users.
Undoubtedly speaking, online shopping has many advantages. To begin with, compared with traditional shopping, it’s very convenient. Besides, more choices than real stores are another attraction to customers.
However, online shopping has its disadvantages. It’s common that articles aren’t so good as they are described online that customers sometimes buy fake goods. Moreover, it’s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.
As for me, I like online shopping but I expect that effective measures should be taken to make it better. The government should work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful and unlawful activities of online shop owners.

试题分析：考查提纲类作文写作，重点考查考生的书面表达的能力。网购的话题应该是中学生熟悉，有话可写的素材，因此难度并不大。把握三个要点：1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚，2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题， 3．作者的建议，注意组织锻炼和过渡。考生在写作时，一定要紧扣写作要点进行写作，三个要点都十分重要，如果考生能够在紧扣写作要点的基础上，抓住语言的准确性，再写出几个亮点词汇和句式，得到高分应该比较轻松。
【亮点说明】文章有两个方面的亮点我们应该学习，一是文章的连贯性很强，浑然天成，这充分的体现在一些连贯词To begin with, Besides, However, Moreover的使用上，第二方面是文章巧妙的使用了一些固定短语和句型：Undoubtedly speaking毋庸置疑,  As for至于， work out制定出， compared with traditional shopping, it’s very convenient. 这是过去分词做状语， It’s common that articles aren’t so good as they are described online that customers sometimes buy fake goods. 这句话用了it做形式主语，it’s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.这句话也用了it做形式主语，而且还有宾语从句。I like online shopping but I expect that effective measures should be taken to make it better. 这句话用了被动语态。