Question

5．假定你是李华．你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣．恰好你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动（Chinese Summer Camp），请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括
1．时间和地点；
2．内容：学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等；
3．报名方式和截止时间
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
Here comes a piece of good news．Chinese Summer Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．（高分句型一）Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture，I'd like to invite you to join it．
The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days，from July 18 to July 28．It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．（高分句型二）As we all know，language is closely related to culture，so I'm convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from language study．In addition，the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums，which is the best way to learn about the country．（高分句型三）By admiring the historical relics，you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country．
If you want to be part of it，please sign up for it before July 2nd at our scho ol website．Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇书信类作文，美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣，你接着学校暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动向他发出邀请，帮助他了解中国文化．
同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：
书信格式正确，根据题干对写信的对象进行调整．
开门见山介绍书信原因--夏令营，便于读信人了解书信重点．
要点要齐全．但不要简单罗列要点．可以适当的加一些变化，使用连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程．
【范文亮点】
1．范文采取了定语从句（ Chinese Summer Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．）；条件状语从句（If you want to be part of it，please sign up for it before July 2nd at our school website．）等句式．
2．文章采用了obsess；historical relics；a wide variety of；As we all know等高级单词或短语．
Chinese Summer Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．（高分句型一）
It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．（高分句型二）
In addition，the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums，which is the best way to learn about the country．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       Here comes a piece of good news．Chinese Summer Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．（高分句型一）Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture，I'd like to invite you to join it．
      The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days，from July 18 to July 28．It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．（高分句型二）As we all know，language is closely related to culture，so I'm convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from language study．In addition，the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums，which is the best way to learn about the country．（高分句型三）By admiring the historical relics，you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country．
       If you want to be part of it，please sign up for it before July 2nd at our scho ol website．Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．