Question

20．Directions：Writing an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
请根据下面的图片，结合你个人的经历，谈谈你的想法．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息请根据下面的图片，结合你个人的经历，谈谈你的想法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、图画是文章的总体框架，要在图画的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：stick out 突出；cut off切断；Indeed确实；based on 以…为根据；More importantly更重要的是；strive for为…而奋斗；
The image above embodies what is referred to as cooperation and win-win situation，the significance of which，from where I stand，cannot be overrated．（高分句型一）
Only then were we aware that the duties could have been allocated based on what each member exceled at．（高分句型二）
True，it is that competing interests and conflicting desires prevail universally，but history has witnessed the long term joint effort between opposing sides，particularly political parties．（高分句型三）

解答 Held in four hands are four irregular shaped jigsaws，with some parts sticking out and some cut off．But when pieced together，they constitute a flawless and crackless square．The image above embodies what is referred to as cooperation and win-win situation，the significance of which，from where I stand，cannot be overrated．（高分句型一）
　　Indeed，it is through working collaboratively that we can get a clear picture of our virtues and drawbacks．Once my learning group was assigned a presentation task covering three sections．We had planned to work on each section separately，but during the rehearsal phase problems like computer illiteracy，lack of fluency popped out．Only then were we aware that the duties could have been allocated based on what each member exceled at．（高分句型二）
　　More importantly，it pays to put aside disputes and seek common development instead．True，it is that competing interests and conflicting desires prevail universally，but history has witnessed the long term joint effort between opposing sides，particularly political parties．（高分句型三）For instance，the Democrats have long been working in partnership with the Republicans，both committed to reviving US economy and striving for citizens'welfare．
　　As social beings，we can hardly exist alone in society．United we stand，divided we fail．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．