Question

7．"面朝大海，春暖花开．"海子的诗曾给人无限的温暖和遐想．在这春花烂漫的人间四月，你最想做些什么，是什么原因拨动了你想这样做的心弦？

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold．It is the best time for going on a trip．
天气既不太热也不太冷．这是去旅行的最佳时间．
高分句型二：
The birds，like musicians，snang their melodious songs in the trees，and the butterflies，like colorful dancers，were fluttering here and there．
鸟儿，像音乐家，唱着悠扬的歌曲在树上，和蝴蝶，喜欢丰富多彩的舞蹈，在这里和那里跳着舞蹈．

解答 Perhaps spring is the most pleasant season of the year．The weather is neither too hot nor too cold．It is the best time for going on a trip（高分句型一）．
The place I most want to go is the countryside．I rode along the winding paths in the fields，across the meadows and down the roads．The willow were fresh and green．The swallows were flying to and from，up and down the sky．The birds，like musicians，sang their melodious songs in the trees，and the butterflies，like colorful dancers，were fluttering here and there（高分句型二）．I breathed the fresh air deeply and laughed heartily．What a magnificent picture it was!It seemed as if we were wandering in a splendid world．
I love spring．I love the vitality．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．