Question

中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。

注意：1．词数150左右；演讲的开头和结尾已写好，不记人总词数。

2．不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。

浪费现象	危害	措施
1．水、电。 2．餐厅的食物。 3．其他(由考生自己添加)	1．自身性格。 2．父母财政负担。 3．自然资源	(内容由考生自己添加)

Dear friends,

May I have your attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.

With the improvement of living standard, there are a lot of waste on campus. For example the students

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That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear friends，

May I have your attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.

With the improvement of living standard, there are a lot of waste on campus. For example the students leave the lights on in the daytime, water running after washing and remains of a lot of food after eating on the table. Some of the students even ask their parents for pocket money. So it’s high time that we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows: In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not the least, it also exhausts the world’s very limited natural resources, water and electricity.

But how to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it’s everyone’s business to fight against waste. On one hand, I should start with myself to save everything. On the other hand, I’d like to remind my friends here to take the lead in reducing the waste.

Therefore, I’m sure, with everyone’s doing his bit, we will charge the present situation.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇演讲稿，属于实用文体。在谋篇布局时可以按照表格提示信息采用三段式，首先对现在校园的浪费现象进行描述。许多学生不能吃完他们点的食物并且随意的丢弃它们fail to eat the foods they have ordered and throw away the leftovers into the dustbin；.一些学生白天不关灯Others leave the lights on in the daytime；还有水龙头也不能及时的关掉water taps are sometimes left running。然后在第二段发表自己的看法，需要从两方面进行阐述：要将节约食物制定为规则，并且及时关灯或水龙头。最后提出采取的措施，发起号召，要求人们行动起来。在写作中要适当使用连接词以使文章行文连贯，语言流畅。时态方面可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时来分别介绍存在的现象和自己的希望。

【亮点说明】本篇范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明。在篇章结构上作者用三段分别介绍了存在的浪费现象、存在的危害、需要采取的措施以及提出号召。在语言方面，作者使用了大量的连接词语，比如in the first place ，secondly ，last but not the least ；on one hand ，on the other hand等和过渡性语言But how to reduce the waste?，不仅使文章具有层次感，而且也使句子更为连贯通顺，增强了语言的逻辑性。此外作者还使用虚拟语气It is high time that we should deal with the problem.增强了文章的可读性。

考点：考查提纲类作文。