Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。  
This morning, after I finished my homeworks, I decided to go to the cinema to see a film. I was about to arrive while I found a foreigner standing on the side of the road, looking nervously. Then I came up to him to see what was the matter about him. However, none of us could understand each other. At the last, we managed to make ourselves understand with the help of body language. The foreigner wanted go to People’s park. I stopped a taxi and told the driver to drive me there. Then I ran to the cinema as fast as I could and have a good time.

Answer 1

This morning, after I finished my homeworks, I decided to go to the cinema to see a film. I
homework（不可数名词）
was about to arrive while I found a foreigner standing on the side of the road, looking nervously.
when(固定句型）                      nervous（look 是系动词）
Then I came up to him to see what was the matter about him. However, none of us could
with （固定词组）neither（2者）
understand each other. At the last, we managed to make ourselves understand with the help of
去掉the（固定词组）            understood让我们被理解
body language. The foreigner wanted go to People’s park. I stopped a taxi and told the driver to
to（want to do )
drive me there. Then I ran to the cinema as fast as I could and have a good time.
him(指的是他）                                had(与could并列）

解析1.homeworks改为homework，因为homework本身为不可数名词。
2.While改为when，因为考查短语was/were about to do when 翻译为“刚要...就在这时...” 类似的短语还有was doing when/had done when .
3.nervously改为nervous，原因在于look为系动词，后面加形容词来构成细表结构。
4.About改为with,因为What’s the matter with sb?是固定搭配，表示你怎么了？
5.None改为neither，因为文中之的是我和一个外国人，是两者否定，因此用neither，而none是三者或者三者以上的否定。
6.Understand改为understood，因为考查make oneself done,这里表示是自己被别人明白的意思。例如：In order to make himself understood, he used lots of body languages .为了是自己被理解，他是用来许多的肢体语言。
7.at last是固定搭配，中间不加the.
8.Want to do想要去做...是固定搭配。
9.Me改为him，是我拦下一辆出租车，让司机将这名外国人带到他想要去的地方。
10.Have改为had, 因为and可以连接并列结构，前后的动词时态应保持一致，而且本文用的是过去式，因此要用had。