Question

生活中困难不可避免，面对各种困难需要信心。假如你是李华，尝试举例说明信心在学习、考试、生活等方面的作用，并就面对困难的态度谈谈你的看法。
注意：
(1)可适当加入发挥，以使行文连贯;
(2)词数：100左右。
(3)开头已经给出。
It is well-known that we live in a dynamic world with various difficulties.                                 
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version：
It is well-known that we live in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the problem is not as big as we imagine.
Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, but some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in a right manner. Nothing is impossible and just do it!

试题分析：本文要求就面对困难的态度和在困难面前信心所起的作用来展开行文。在写作时可以根据提示把文章分成两个方面，一是提出信心在困难中的作用；二是谈对困难的态度和看法。在写作时要尽量使用高级词汇、短语和句型，围绕主题，将意思完整清楚地表达出来。同时，还要注意使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果等意义的关联词语，以增强文章的连贯性和流畅性。写作时可能用到的短语：for example；have difficulty in doing sth； there is no difficulty in doing sth ; in face of difficulty 等。
【亮点说明】本文结构合理，层次分明，在文章开头首先提出信心在面对困难时的重要性，然后在第二段以高考为例来说明信心的作用，最后提出作者自己对待困难的态度，这种谋篇布局的方式显示了作者思路的清晰。在句式方面作者使用了经典的It is well-known that…., nothing is more important than …..等，而且文中出现的大量短语be faced with、With confidence、Take …. for example、On the whole、In my eyes、和副词Accordingly不仅反映了作者丰富的词汇知识，也丰富了文章的句式结构，使文章语言更为流畅、自然。