Question

二．近来，有学生在校外租房而不愿住大寝室。请根据下面提示，一分为二地用英语写一篇短文，说明两者各自的好处和坏处，并表明自己的观点。20分。
学习时间；
安全；
自由性；
与同学交往；
学习效果。
（注：开头和结尾已经给出，不包含在5句话当中。）
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm .Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages and disadvantages for both.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________         So living or not living in dorm depends on your own need. Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

Answer 1

Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm . Instead, they rent houses outside the school .There are advantages and disadvantages for both.
Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates and of course it is safer.A dorm is more like a society, which enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later .But sometimes it is a little noisy in dorm, and we are often disturbed each other when we are studying .As for renting houses to live alone, it's better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others, as a result of which, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-hearty . But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.
So living or not living in dorm depends on your own need. Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

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