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13．科学技术的发展给我们的日常生活带来了很大的变化．请你以"Science and technology is changing our life greatly"为话题，谈谈你家三代人购物生活的变化，并畅想未来的购物方式．
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With the development of science and technology，our way of life has been changing all the time．．

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分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息科学技术的发展给我们的日常生活带来了很大的变化．请你以"Science and technology is changing our life greatly"为话题，谈谈你家三代人购物生活的变化，并畅想未来的购物方式，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、开放式作文要善于利用自己的想象，按照一定逻辑关系来写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：With the development of science and technology随着科学和技术的发展；in many ways在很多方面；in the future在未来；prefer to do喜欢做某事；as well as 也，和；
Many things that we thought would never happen before are now a reality．（高分句型一）
Later，supermarkets opened in our town，so my mother went shopping in a supermarket near my home because it was very convenient．（高分句型二）
Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like sitting in front of the computer because it can save us time and labour．（高分句型三）
New technology will benefit us a lot and we will enjoy the advantages it brings to us．（高分句型四）

解答 With the development of science and technology，our way of life has been changing all the time．Many things that we thought would never happen before are now a reality．（高分句型一）For example，the way of shopping has changed in many ways．My grandmother told me she usually covered a long distance to a small shop in town to buy her goods．Later，supermarkets opened in our town，so my mother went shopping in a supermarket near my home because it was very convenient．（高分句型二）
      In recent years，online shopping has become popular．Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like sitting in front of the computer because it can save us time and labour．（高分句型三）
      I think，in the future，we may depend on our robot servants to do the shopping as well as the housework．New technology will benefit us a lot and we will enjoy the advantages it brings to us．（高分句型四）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．