Question

假如你是李华，是某学校高二的学生，请根据以下某西餐厅的招聘广告，给负责招聘的Smith先生发一封email，介绍你的情况。

Par-time Waiter/Waitress wanted *Age: over 17 *Fluent English *Work experience Email,Hn5159 @ hotmail.com

注意
1. 词数100左右短文的开头和结尾已给出 不计入总词数。
2. 可以说明你的其他优势。
Dear Smith,
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Smith,
I’m writing to apply for the job. I’m a seventeen-year-old student of Senior High Two. As the summer vocation is drawing near, I hope to get more work experience by working during the vocation. I think I’m qualified for the job because I once worked part-time in a restaurant for two months. And I can speak English fluently, having won several prizes in English contests. Besides, I always get along well with others and I believe I will enjoy working in your restaurant. I’m sure I’m the suitable person for the position.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：本文是篇应聘应用文，内容提示较简洁，只是框架，但学生也容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，介绍自己的情况要用一般现在时，自己的意志要用将来时态。其次还要注意写应聘书信的语言及语气。给应聘公司写信要语气委婉，用第一人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如apply for, draw near, be qualified for, get along well with等， 还运用了进行时表将来，doing做状语，looking forward to来结尾等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：besides等。