Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。每句话中最多有两处。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tom is a senior two students who devotes himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They bought a kite a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom enjoyed fly the kite himself. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend.

Answer 1

1.students ------student

2.studies -----studied

3.too----so

4.in -----on

5.break 前面加上 a

6.they like it 删去 it

7.fly—flying

8.but---and

9.actively----active

10.why ---because

【解析】

1.1】Tom 是一个高二的学生，是单数形式，所以把students 改成student。

2.2】说的是上星期六的事，所以句子用一般过去时态，把studies改成studied。

3.3】固定搭配so…that…,所以把too改成so。

4.4】在某一天的上午、下午、晚上用on ，所以把in改成on。

5.5】固定搭配have a break 休息一会，故在break 前面加上a。

6.6】a kite是先行词，后面是which引导的定语从句，所以从句中的. It是多余的，故把they liked it中的it 删去。

7.7】固定形式enjoy doing 喜爱做某事，故把fly改成flying。

8.8】全家人一起在户外野餐，并且感到很放松。此处表示递进关系，故把but改成and。

9.9】Tom在课堂上是充满活力和活跃的。actively 是副词，所以把actively改成active。

10.10】此处的表语从句表示的是原因，“他说这只是因为他有一个更好的周末”。所以把why 改成because。

考点：考查短文改错。