Question

3．假如你是李华，你的班级打算在暑假组织一次班级活动，有两种活动方案供大家选择：
一   慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；
二   组织一次班级毕业晚会．
请你选择其中一个方案，用英语写一篇100～120个词的短文，提出对该项活动方案的建议并谈谈提出建议的理由．短文开头已给出，不计入词数．
Our class is planning to organize a class activity during the coming summer vacation．                         

Answer 1

分析 这是关于暑假班级活动话题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时态．内容包括：一交代写作背景；二提出建议以及理由．
高分句型：
1．I have a preference for holding a charity sale during this vocation，the reasons for which lie in the following aspects．句子里 have a preference for 表示"偏爱"；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句；lie in 表示"存在于"；the following aspects．表示"以下几个方面"．
我更喜欢在假期举行一次慈善义卖，原因存在于以下几个方面．
2．In a word，it is good for us to hold the charity sale，for which can help those in want of help and do benefits to our personal development句子里it在形式主语，代指动词不定式to hold the charity sale；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指the charity sale； in want of 表示"需要"；do benefits to 表示"对…有好处"．
总之，举行一次慈善义卖对我们有好处，因为这可以帮助那些需要帮助的人，对我们的个人发展有利．

解答 Our class is planning to organize a class activity during winter vacation．There are two activities to choose from．One is to hold a charity sale and the other is to organize a graduation evening party．（交代写作背景） 
     I have a preference for holding a charity sale during this vocation，the reasons for which lie in the following aspects．【高分句型一】First of all，the money earned in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need．This will not only help them through difficulties，but also give them warmness and happiness．Moreover，it will also benefit us a lot．For instance，we will grasp the significance of being considerate and thoughtful．Besides，giving others a hand also makes us delightful．In a word，it is good for us to hold the charity sale for which can help those in want of help and do benefits to our personal development．【高分句型二】（提出建议以及理由）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
书面表达试题一般都由"情景"和"要求"两部分构成．"情景"中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而"要求"一般在书面表达的后半部分，以"注意"形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求．因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点．