Question

1．在班内，同学们就"青少年是否应该抽烟"展开了讨论，讨论结果如下：

人数	观点	理由
大约80%	反对	危害身体健康；一曰成瘾，很难戒除；影响他人健康
大约20%	赞成	身处重压时，可以缓解压力；一种时尚，感觉很酷

请根据表格内容写一篇短文，并表明自己的观点．
要求：1．词数120左右；
2．可根据提示适当扩展，但要保持流畅、连贯． 开头己经给出，不计入总词数．
Recently，we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes．On the one hand，about 20% of the students agree that adolescents smoke cigarettes．In their opinion，smoking can help them ease the pressure when they are under pressure．（高分句型一）Besides，smoking is fashionable and it feels cool to smoke in front of other peers．（赞成意见）However，on the other hand，about 80% object to it．They think smoking does great damage to their bodies．Once they are addicted to it，it'll be rough to quit it．What's more，smoking also has a harmful effect on others，non-smokers in particular．More importantly，if you are a heavy smoker，you'll feel terrible．（反对意见）
As far as I'm concerned，adolescents should not get into the bad habit of smoking．That's because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term．（高分句型二）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In their opinion，smoking can help them ease the pressure when they are under pressure．
高分句型二：
That's because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term．
句型一 ①smoking can help them ease the pressure 该句的主语为动名词充当，动名词做主语谓语应使用单数   ②when they are under pressure．该句是一个由when引导的时间状语从句
高分句型二：because it does no good to our physical 该句是一个由because 引导的位于is之后的表语从句

解答 Recently，we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes．
    On the one hand，about 20% of the students agree that adolescents smoke cigarettes．In their opinion，smoking can help them ease the pressure when they are under pressure．（高分句型一）Besides，smoking is fashionable and it feels cool to smoke in front of other peers．（赞成意见）However，on the other hand，about 80% object to it．They think smoking does great damage to their bodies．Once they are addicted to it，it'll be rough to quit it．What's more，smoking also has a harmful effect on others，non-smokers in particular．More importantly，if you are a heavy smoker，you'll feel terrible．（反对意见）
    As far as I'm concerned，adolescents should not get into the bad habit of smoking．That's because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term．（高分句型二）

点评 该书面表达为图表类，通常都有一定的数据或者表格内容作为写作参考和依据．考生应细致观察图表内容，用准确的、简单明了的语言将图表内容表达清楚．另外，平时应注意积累相应短语和词汇，以使得行文有更多的亮点．