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5.外籍教师Richard 想了解一下你所在班级学生的到校方式.假设你是李华,经过调查(survey)之后,以"The Way I Go to School"为题,根据要点提示写一篇英语短文,向Richard介绍你们班同学和你自己到校的方式.调查结果如下:
percent35%25%20%20%
way公汽地铁私家车骑单车或步行
要点:
1  描述调查结果.
2 你自己的上学方式以及原因(至少两个).
要求:文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 字数100左右.
                                                      
          Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 这是一篇图表类作文,本文所给提示和要求比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来.动笔前提纲式简要回答提示中的两个问题,并适当发挥.根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态、搭配及主谓一致问题.写作中适当使用连接词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
【亮点说明】这篇短文话题贴近学生生活,学生有话可写.陈述理由分条缕析,层次清楚.多使用简单句.同时,使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.如:make use of,As far as I'm concerned,To begin with,away from,take sb some time to do sth,be good for,compared with,prefer to 等.在学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

解答 I'm Li Hua.I'm so glad to hear that you want to know the way we go to school.According to my survey,three in five make use of public transportation----35% by bus and one quarter by subway.(高分句型)One fifth of us go to school by private car and the rest ride a bike or walk to school.As far as I'm concerned,I prefer going to school on foot for many reasons.(高分句型)To begin with,my home is two kilometers away from school.It only takes me about 20 minutes to get there.Second,walking to school is a kind of exercise,which is good for my health.(高分句型)Moreover,compared with other means of transport,it's much safer to go to school on foot.(高分句型)Therefore,I prefer to walk to school.(130词)

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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