Question

假如你叫李华，最近你校在为一批来自英国的假期学生征寻住宿家庭，你有意申请。

请用英语写封自荐信，说明你申请的理由：

1．住房宽敞，环境好，交通便，亦有私家车；

2．父母和我都擅长英语，乐于交流； 

3．曾经接待过来自美国的朋友。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3．开头已写好，不入计总词数。

Dear Sir,    I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students. Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment can meet all their needs. zxxk

Apart from the convenient public transportation, our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English and an outgoing personality, my parents and I are sure to have no difficulty communicating with them. Above all, we have hosted some American friends, through which we’ve gained lots of experience. In addition, my mother is expert in cooking, and it can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.

I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hu

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。