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2．假定你是李晓华，住在江城．你的笔友Bob谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡的情况．请你用英语写一封回信．回信必须包括下列内容：
1、自然情况：位于江苏的西北，风景优美，适合居住；
2、成就：经济发展迅速，新建了不少工厂、住房和道路；
3、存在的问题：水污染，空气污染，交通拥挤；
4、对江城发展的看法：内容自选．
注意：1、回信中不能使用"江城"以外的地名；
   2、词数100个左右．信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：economy  n．经济
Dear Bob，
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．       ．
Yours，
Li Xiaohua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍家乡的文章．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容主要包括：一点明主题；二自然情况；三成就；四存在的问题；五对江城发展的看法．
高分句型：
1．It is a beautiful place for people to live in，whose economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years．句子里whose 引导定语从句，先行词是a beautiful place．
这是一个适宜人们居住的美丽的地方，在过去的十年间，它的经济在快速发展．
2．I also think that measures should be taken to make traffic go smoothly so that we'll have a better hometown in future．句子里用了take measures to do 的被动形式，表示"措施应该被采取"；so that 用的目的状语从句，表示"为了"．
我也认为，为了在未来有一个更美好的家乡，我们应该采取措施让交通更顺畅．

解答 It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．（点明主题）The city is situated in the northwest of Jiangsu Province．（自然情况）It is a beautiful place for people to live in，whose economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years．【高分句型一】New factories，houses and roads have been built．More schools and hospitals are available for people．（成就）However，there are still some problems，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours．（存在的问题）
     In my opinion，Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically．I also think that measures should be taken to make traffic go smoothly so that we'll have a better hometown in future．【高分句型二】（对江城发展的看法）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类作文的要点一般给的比较多，这就要求我们用恰当的连词和句式把这些要点连城篇章．在此过程中，要注意词语的合理运用，以及层次的递进关系．