Question

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。

［写作内容］
请根据以下信息，介绍一位人物
［写作要求］
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
「评分标准］
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

Answer 1

Chris Stack, 34, a brave British man，whose health condition was so bad that he was warned three times by doctors that he would be dying, has been operated on his lung and heart. In spite of that, Chris tried to live longer to accompany his wife and children. Five years ago, he decided to take part in the running training and he has joined in many competitions of different levels. Now he is preparing himself for the Great Birmingham Run. All people think he is becoming healthier and more and more confident.

试题分析：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】范文中出现了常用的词组：In spite of 虽然，take part in 参加，competitions of different levels.各种水平的比赛，prepare sb for sth“使某人做好…的准备”，好的句型有： Chris Stack, 34, a brave British man，whose health condition was so bad that he was warned three times by doctors that he would be dying, has been operated on his lung and heart.这句话用了定语从句，so…that…句型。