Question

9．假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下：
1．描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；
2．介绍你处理该事的方式；
3．谈谈你的感想．
注意：
1．词数不少于120个；
2．可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息．
Dear Zhang Hua，
It's three months since I heard from you last time．Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson．
On hearing the bell，students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can．But a boy，Li Ming，whose father died a month ago，was late for the class．He stood outside the classroom，silently．I smiled to him and let him came in．After a while，he cried on his desk．Then I walked to him and asked what had happened．He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her．At the same time，he apologized to me for his lateness．Moved by his words，I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named"Mother"for the students．How time flies!Class was over before I realized it．
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them．Do you think so？I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours truly，
Li Hong．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
It's three months since I heard from you last time．Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson
离我上次收到你的信已经三个月了，现在我要告诉你一个感人的故事，发生在我的第一节课．
高分句型二：
Moved by his words，I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named"Mother"for the students．
被他的话所感动，我赞扬了他的行为，决定唱一首名为"母亲"给学生们．

解答 Dear Zhang Hua，
It's three months since I heard from you last time．Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson（高分句型一）．
On hearing the bell，students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can．But a boy，Li Ming，whose father died a month ago，was late for the class．He stood outside the classroom，silently．I smiled to him and let him came in．After a while，he cried on his desk．Then I walked to him and asked what had happened．He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her．At the same time，he apologized to me for his lateness．Moved by his words，I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named"Mother"for the students（高分句型二）．How time flies!Class was over before I realized it．
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them．Do you think so？I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours truly，
Li Hong

点评 本文属于半开放性提纲式书信体，要点有三，选材学生熟悉，也是发生在他们身边的故事，学生只要把握准情景和要求，使表达的内容不走题即可．