Question

19．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter近期打算来中国，他对中国的乡村生活很感兴趣．你打算邀请他去体验一下你家乡的"农家乐"．请用英语写封信向他推荐，要点如下：
1．"农家乐"兴起的原因；
2．"农家乐"的服务特色．
注意：1．词数110左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：农家乐 agritainment
Dear Peter，
It's great to learn that you're coming to China to experience the country life．The"agritainment"，a kind of farm-based tourism，is now very popular in my hometown and I think it should be a must for you to experience after your arrival．（高分句型一）
As more people from cities are fed up with crowds，noise and traffic jams，they're trying hard to get closer to nature．（高分句型二）However，few people can afford a long holiday in terms of time and money．As a result，"agritainment"catches on，which provides people with great relaxation and enjoyment．If you take the"agritainment"，you can enjoy not just local food，country views，but some hands-on activities as well．（高分句型三）I'm sure you will have a pleasant stay in my hometown．
Looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息和图表说明来介绍小区的具体情况．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照方位顺序进行介绍．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态． 4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构．比如It's great to learn that you're coming to China to experience the country life．是it作形式主语．If you take the"agritainment"，you can enjoy not just local food，country views．是if引导的条件状语从句，还有非限制性定语从句As a result，"agritainment"catches on，which provides people with great relaxation and enjoyment．状语As a result的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯．
The"agritainment"，a kind of farm-based tourism，is now very popular in my hometown and I think it should be a must for you to experience after your arrival．（高分句型一）
As more people from cities are fed up with crowds，noise and traffic jams，they're trying hard to get closer to nature．（高分句型二）
If you take the"agritainment"，you can enjoy not just local food，country views，but some hands-on activities as well．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      It's great to learn that you're coming to China to experience the country life．The"agritainment"，a kind of farm-based tourism，is now very popular in my hometown and I think it should be a must for you to experience after your arrival．（高分句型一）
      As more people from cities are fed up with crowds，noise and traffic jams，they're trying hard to get closer to nature．（高分句型二）However，few people can afford a long holiday in terms of time and money．As a result，"agritainment"catches on，which provides people with great relaxation and enjoyment．If you take the"agritainment"，you can enjoy not just local food，country views，but some hands-on activities as well．（高分句型三）I'm sure you will have a pleasant stay in my hometown．
       Looking forward to your coming．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．