Question

近来，教育部颁布文件要求逐步将体育考试纳入高考。此举引起了人们的广泛关注。下面是人们的一些观点。请你结合此事，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。

同意	1、对增强学生体质有引导作用； 2、学校的体育教学将更加受到重视； 3、体育课被挤占的现象将不再存在。
反对	1、测试并非体育教学的目的； 2、体育应该从培养运动兴趣出发； 3、提高学生的身体素质并非一朝一夕就能够完成。
你的看法	……

参考词汇：高考College Entrance Examination；
注意：1. 必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数120左右；
3. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Recently a new policy was approved by the Ministry of Education.
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Recently a new policy was approved by the Ministry of Education. It is regulated that sports scores will be added to the scores of every student’s College Entrance Examination. The policy caused many people’s concern. 
Some people hold the view that the policy will serve as a guide to strengthen students’ physical quality. Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education, and it’s easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen.
On the other hand, some people argue that Roman was not built in a day. It takes time to meet the goal. The teaching of PE should be aimed at developing students’ interest in sports rather than using scores as a means of assessment. If the policy of college Entrance Examination doesn’t carry out a reform fundamentally, this new policy won’t work out well.
In my opinion, every school should make a specific plan of improving students’ physical quality. Setting aside some time for students to work out every day is also helpful.

试题分析： 本篇书面表达属于正反观点对比的文章，所以在文章开头应该首先提出写作背景，即讨论的内容。在谋篇布局方面，根据表格提示信息可以把文章分为三段，即同意的观点，反对的观点和作者的看法。而且从要点提示可知文章应该采用一般现在时，使用第一人称。因为提示要点较多，而且为了行文的流畅和内容的衔接，同学们在写作时要恰当使用连接词，比如for one thing , for another thing , besides , in addition 等。此外，在写作时还要注意使用高级词汇和多种句式，比如定语从句，状语从句，倒装句等的使用以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构清晰，符合观点类作文的写作模式。作者在文章开头提出人们关注的体育测试是否进入高考这一问题，然后介绍了赞同的观点，反对的观点，最后讲明自己的观点看法。这种结构安排使文章内容紧凑，层次分明。在文中作者使用on the other hand 和 in my opinion 等作为过渡，使文章内容连贯，行文流畅。文中大量短语 hold the view , attach importance to , work out ，aim at和定语从句以及谚语的使用some people argue that Roman was not built in a day.显示了作者丰富的词汇知识和对句式的准确把握，这些都为范文增添了亮点。