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4．假定你是李华，你原本和Peter约好一起去观看一场足球比赛，但是昨天下午你突然接到母亲的电话说她要来看你，结果你没能按时赴约．为此你感到十分抱歉．请根据以下要点给Peter写一封信，以表歉意．主要内容包括：
1．表达歉意； 2．解释没能去的原因； 3．希望下周三邀请Peter吃饭作为补偿．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数．
Dear Peter，
I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）I am extremely sorry for not going to watch the football game together with you yesterday afternoon．Please accept my sincere apology．Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二）You know I hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her．So I had to cancel the appointment with you．
In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）It will be my treat．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours'
LiHua

Answer 1

分析 根据内容要求我们先总述事情，即没能和他一起去看球赛，然后再根据提示依次来写．首先表达歉意时我们常用：I am sorry for…；accept my sincere apology等．
然后再详细介绍没去的原因：昨天下午突然接到母亲的电话说她要来 received my mother's call，she would come for a visit，hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her等．最后提出下周三请客作为补偿，可以用In order to make up for it，be my treat等．最后在写信件结尾-盼着你的回信I'm looking forward to your reply．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）
Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二
  In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I suppose you may be a little unhappy because of me as you were expecting me to come in any circumstance．（高分句型一）I am extremely sorry for not going to watch the football game together with you yesterday afternoon．Please accept my sincere apology．Yesterday afternoon I was going to leave the dormitory when I received my mother's call telling me she would come for a visit．（高分句型二）You know I hadn't seen her for a couple of months and I did miss her．So I had to cancel the appointment with you．
     In order to make up for it，let's meet at Doe's Café at noon next Wednesday．（高分句型三）It will be my treat．
     I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．