Question

8．假设你是李华，请你根据以下要点给英国笔友Tom写信交流如何保持健康．
   要点：1．对Tom表示问候并询问其身体状况；
2．保持健康需要做到：作息有规律；饮食要均衡；参加体育锻炼；保持好心情（mood）等；
3．询问Tom保持健康的秘诀．
   注意：1.100词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．以下谚语可选用于文中适当位置．
     An apple a day keeps the doctor away．
     Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise．
     All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．
Dear Tom，
How's everything going？I am writing to       ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类书信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称展开叙述，以一般现在时态为主．内容主要包括：一点明主题；二保持健康需要做到的事情；三询问Tom保持健康的秘诀．
高分句型：
1．As you know，having a healthy lifestyle is of great importance．句子里As 引导定语从句，表示"正如"．
正如你所知，有一个健康的生活方式是很重要的．
2．Expect to hear from you to learn something you do to keep healthy soon．句子里you do 是something的定语从句，省略了关系词that．
期盼收到你的来信，了解你是怎样保持健康的．

解答 第二节 书面表达（One possible version）
Dear Tom，
     How's everything going？I am writing to talk with you about something keeping fit．（点明主题）As you know，having a healthy lifestyle is of great importance．【高分句型一】The first thing to do is to live a regular life．Remember：early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise．At the same time，you should have a balanced diet．What's more，don't forget to take part in some activities．Try to do sports regularly to relax，such as walking，jogging，running or swimming．As the proverb goes，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．Finally，keep yourself in a good mood．Don't get annoyed by small things．（保持健康需要做到的事情）
       The above are my ways of keeping healthy．How do you like them？Expect to hear from you to learn something you do to keep healthy soon．【高分句型二】（询问Tom保持健康的秘诀）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
在写作时，根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇．在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句意思连贯，结构衔接，力求准确生动、条理清楚．