Question

以下是肇庆端砚（Duan Inkstone）的相关信息：

历史： 1）因产地在肇庆的端州而得名；     2）端砚名列中国四大名砚之首； 3）一种传统的手工艺品，历史悠久，起源于1300多年前; 4）盛行于宋朝时期，当时深受中国文人的青睐。 特性： 1）端砚的种类多，质量好，设计精美；  2）目前端砚深受收藏家的喜爱。 作用： 1）一种书写的重要工具；  2）端砚在传播中国文化中起着重要作用； 3）是肇庆深厚文化底蕴的标志。

参考词汇：  端砚：Duan Inkstone    手工艺品: handcraft      文人：literati

【写作内容】请根据以上信息写一篇英语短文，介绍肇庆手工艺品“端砚”，了解“端砚” 文化，内容包括：端砚的历史、特性和它的作用。

【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容

【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Duan Inkstone, ranking the first of “The Four Famous Inkstones” in China, got its name for the fact that it was originally produced in Duanzhou of Zhaoqing. It’s also widely known as a traditional handcraft and has a long history going back to more than 1300 years ago. Duan Inkstone became universally popular in Song Dynasty, when it was favored by ancient Chinese literati. Nowadays, many collectors would add to their collection of Duan Inkstone owing to its wide varieties, high quality, let alone its beautiful design. As an important writing tool, Duan Inkstone has played a very important role in spreading Chinese culture, and it is also a symbol of profound cultural background of Zhaoqing.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求学生根据提供的信息写一篇英语短文，介绍肇庆的手工艺品端砚。写作内容必须包括端砚的历史、特性和作用。对端砚的描述要客观，不可胡编乱造，使用第一人称进行写作。注意不要出现拼写和时态错误。

亮点说明：范文使用了一些重要与市政府：非谓语动词ranking the first of “The Four Famous Inkstones”和going back to more than 1300 years ago；同位语从句the fact that it was originally produced in Duanzhou of Zhaoqing；定语从句when it was favored by ancient Chinese literati和As an important writing tool等，能够熟练使用语法知识进行遣词造句，提升了作文的层次；

范文使用了owing to；let alone；played a very important role in等，使作文内容显得充实。

考点：材料类作文