Question

随着留学热潮的不断升温，“微留学”也迅速进入学生的视野。“微留学”是指学生通过利用假期时间组团去国外名校进行短期的游历和学习，对留学生活有个初步体验。对此，你们班举行了一次以“中学生是否应该进行微留学”为主题的班会。下表是讨论的结果，请根据下表用英语写一篇文章并发表你的观点。
参考词汇：微留学short-term overseas study tours或micro study tours
虚荣心vanity

赞成：60%	反对：40%
（1）更好的了解国外名校； （2）提前体验留学生活。	（1）费用太高，多数家庭无力承担； （2）有些学生“留学”是为了跟风、炫耀。
你的观点……

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Answer 1

Recently we have had a discussion about whether middle school students should go abroad for short-term overseas study tours. Opinions are divided as follows.
About 60% of us think it wise to go on short-term overseas study tours, through which we can get closer to some famous schools and have a better knowledge of them. Meanwhile, we can also experience the life of studying abroad ahead of schedule.
The rest of us hold different views. In their opinion, the fees are too high for most parents to afford. Besides, some middle school students just want to follow the trend and show off.
Personally, short-term overseas study tours may be a motivation for us to study harder. It can also serve as a test showing whether a student a able to live an independent life abroad or not.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，话题是关于出国留学的话题，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.但是你的观点要自己组织，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如go abroad，as follows，get closer to，have a better knowledge of，ahead of schedule，in one’s opinion，show off.；还运用句型：which引导的非限定性定语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如Meanwhile，Besides，Personally, whether … or  not…，and等等。