Question

假如你叫李华，刚刚升入高中，你在学习英语的过程中遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助，并想给班级的英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：

学习英语时遇到的问题	1.生词多，记忆有难度 2....
向英语老师提出的建议	1.介绍一些学习英语的好方法 2....

字数：100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear teacher,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help.                                 

                                                                    

                                                                    

Yours.

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear teacher,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.

Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily？ In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.

Yours.

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，话题是关于自己在学习英语时所遇见的困难向老师说明并求助。文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生需要翻译成英语。灵活变化表达，适度进行改写。在写作的时候使用高级的词汇和各种句型，让文章充满变化。在发表个人观点的时候，尽量使用谚语来提高文章的档次。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作

点评：提纲类短文写作的关键在于要把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏。要灵活运用多种句式，让文章充满变化，注意语法规则的使用，使用高级的句型或者词汇要与个人的能力相结合，尽量不要出错。