Question

假设你是大一学生王林，你的母校校刊编辑邀请你给高三的同学写一封公开信，请你根据以下要点回信：
1.你自己高三时学习方面的变化；
2.你自己高三时生活方面的变化；
3.你对高三同学的建议（至少两点）。
注意：1.内容包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译；
2.字数120左右，文章开头已提供，不计入总词数。
Dear fellows,
I’m really glad to share my thoughts with you.                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours,
Wang Lin

Answer 1

Dear fellows,
I’m really glad to share my thoughts with you. I will give a brief description about my previous experience and offer some suggestions as well.
It was true that great changes took place since entering senior three. On one hand, I studied much harder since I knew time was limited. What made me excited was that I did make great progress after a period of full devotion to study. On the other hand, my life also changed a lot. To ensure energy and efficiency during the day, I made a more practical schedule and strictly follow it every day, which led to a more regulated life and really benefited me a lot.
As for my suggestions, the following tips may help. First of all, remember to persist whatever difficulty you meet. Besides, communicate more with your classmates, teachers and parents, from whom you can definitely gain support in all aspects.
Best wishes to all of you.
Yours,
Wang Lin.

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假设你是大一学生王林，你的母校校刊编辑邀请你给高三的同学写一封公开信，请你根据以下要点回信：1.你自己高三时学习方面的变化；2.你自己高三时生活方面的变化；3.你对高三同学的建议（至少两点）。需要写的内容已经给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】It was true that great changes took place since entering senior three.这里含有一个主语从句；What made me excited was that I did make great progress after a period of full devotion to study.这里含有一个主语从句和一个表语从句。