Question

4．文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
   增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
   删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
   修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   
2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分．

Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination．"Should I choose a good major and a good university？"Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested．It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future．However，those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one's development．They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs．In my opinion，a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university．But if we couldn't obtain both，the first thing to consider is a good major，because no matter where we study，they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．

Answer 1

分析 本文作者主要针对高三学生在通过大学入学考试后，就"是选择一个好专业还是选择好大学"这一问题而展开的讨论；有些学生更愿意先考虑专业，这样他们就可以学到他们感兴趣的东西了，这同样会使得他们在将来能够从事他们最喜欢的工作成为可能；但是，还有一些学生认为：环境对他们今后的发展很重要；他们还认为，从一流的大学毕业的学生往往更容易找到好的工作；最后，作者在文中表明了自己的观点：最好的选择是在一所好大学里选一个好专业，但是，如果两者不能兼得的话，最好还是选择一个好的专业；因为无论我们在哪里学习，只要我们努力，我们仍然可以在某一领域取得很多成就．

解答 短文改错：
Senior Three studentwill face the question after they pass by 
                   students                                             去掉by
the college entrance examination．"Should I choose a good major and a
                                                                                                 or
good university？"Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can
learn what they are interested∧．It will also make it possibly
                                          in                                possible
for them to take their favorite jobs in the future．However，those who think
differently believes that the environment is important to one's 
                 believe
development．They also believe that students graduate from leading
                                          graduating或在graduate前加who/that
universities are often more likely to find good jobs．In my opinion，a best 
                                                                                                   the
choice is to choose a good major at a good university．But if we couldn'tobtain both，
                                                                                                  can't
the first thing to consider is a good major，because no matter where we study，they can
                                                                                                                     we
still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．

1．将student改为students   考查名词单复数    根据句意可知，此处指的是通过大学入学考试的高三的学生们；故用名词的复数students 
2．去掉by    考查固定短语的用法    固定短语pass by"经过"； pass the examination"通过考试"，此处指的是"通过大学入学考试"；故去掉by
3．将and改为 or     考查连词的用法     根据句意可知，此处表示选择关系，即：我应该选择一个好专业还是一所好大学？故用or
4．interested后加in    考查固定短语的用法   固定短语be interested in"对…感兴趣"；本句的意思是：有些学生更愿意先考虑专业，这样他们就可以学习他们感兴趣的东西了；此处in的宾语是连接代词what 
5．将 possibly改为possible    考查固定结构的用法"make sb．/sth．+形容词"意为：使某人或某物变得…；此处指"使得他们在将来能够从事他们最喜欢的工作成为可能"故用形容词possible 
6．将believes改为believe    考查主谓一致    由于此处的主语是"those who think differently那些有不同想法的人"表示复数，故谓语动词用原形
7．将graduate改为graduating或在graduate前加who/that   考查定语的用法    此处在句中作后置定语，修饰名词students，并与该名词构成逻辑上的主谓关系；故用现在分词graduating；另外，此处也可以改为定语从句，先行词students（指人），在从句中作主语，故用关系代词who/that  
8．将a改为the     考查形容词最高级的用法     在形容词最高级的前面加a，不表示最高级，意为：一个非常…的…；在形容词最高级的前面加the，才表示最高级；此处意为：最好的选择；故用the
9．将couldn't改为can't    考查时态    根据句意"但是，如果两者不能兼得的话，最好还是选择一个好的专业"可知，此处说明的是现实情况；故用一般现在时； 当can/could 表示能力，意为"能，可以"时，can 通常用于现在时，could 用于过去时；故用can't
10．将they改为we    考查人称的一致性    根据句意"因为无论我们在哪里学习，只要我们努力，我们仍然可以在某一领域取得很多成就"可知，此处的主语应是we

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．