Question

假如你是李华，想参加中英交换生的活动，请根据活动要求写一封自荐信。内容包括：

1.英语水平

2.身体状况

3.沟通能力

注意：1.字数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear sir ,

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Yours sincerely,

Li hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Sir,

After reading the advertisement for an exchange student in Britain,I would like to apply for the position.

I am 25years old,male,unmarried.I’m 1.76meters tall,strong and healthy.I graduated from a famous university in 2012 and majored in English.Therefore,I can speak fluent English and have no trouble communicating with different people from defferent countries.I had some useful experience in dealing with different people and working under pressure as a part-time English teaching during my study at university.The most important thing is that I have been an exchange student studying in the USA.If I meet your requirements,I’ll be very thankful for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：提醒考生注意(1)认真审题，确定体裁。要求学生仔细审题，明确体裁，领会出题者用意。(2)构思要点。根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架。(3)选词造句，避难选易。在要点、层次明确的情况下，选用自己最熟悉的单词、句式进行造句。如果不会用复杂句就用简单句表达要点．注意主谓语一致、人称、数量、大小写、标点。(4)认真检查，避免错误。仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致。

【亮点说明】本文在语言表达上清晰流畅，而且要点全面。文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如graduated from, have no trouble communicating with, under pressure还运用了that，if引导的状语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：Therefore等等。不仅反映出作者词汇的丰富，而且也使文章更加简洁明了，清晰易懂。

考点：提纲作文。