Question

11．假设你是某中学高一（1）班班长李华，你们的口语教师Julie已完成一年教学任务，准备回美国．请你根据以下内容要点给Julie写一封e-mail，并代表全班同学对她表示感谢．
要点：
1．Julie上课的日子非常轻松愉快；
2．Julie总是组织很多课堂活动，让大家积极参与；
3．她经常说"Never say you can't"给大家留下了深刻的印象；
4．她用"team spirit"来鼓励大家交流和分享；
5．希望她能再到中国来．
注意：1．词数为100左右；
      2．开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）．
Dear Julie，
                                                
By the way，I am attaching（附上） your picture with the whole class．Please do check it out．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封感谢信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态主要用一般过去时态（回忆过去在一起的事）．内容主要包括：一写信的目的；二回忆过去在一起的事；三表示祝愿；四附加说明．
高分句型：
1．By the time you are going back to America，I'd like to say thanks to you on behalf of the whole class for your teaching us so well．
句子里 on behalf of 表示"代表"； teaching 做for 的宾语．
到你将要会美国的时候，我想要代表我们全班对于你对我们的教育表示感谢．
2．In your lively class，you organized many interesting activities，in which every one of us took an active part．句子里 which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词many interesting activities，in which=where．
在你生动的课堂上，你组织了许多有趣的活动，每个人都积极参加这些活动．

解答 Dear Julie，
How time flies!By the time you are going back to America，I'd like to say thanks to you on behalf of the whole class for your teaching us so well．【高分句型一】（写信的目的）We always felt the days when you taught our oral class were pleasant and relaxing．In your lively class，you organized many interesting activities，in which every one of us took an active part．【高分句型二】You often said"Never say you can't"，leaving us a deep impression．What's more，you told us how effectively team spirit works and encouraged us to communicate and share each other's opinions bravely．（回忆过去在一起的事）
  Now it's hard for us to say goodbye to you，though we have to．Wish you a good trip and we sincerely hope you will come back some day．（表示祝愿）
  By the way，I am attaching （附上）your picture with the whole class．Please do check it out．（附加说明）
                                                                         Yours，
                                                              Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
"介词+which"在关系分句中分别可作时间、地点和原因状语，代替相应的关系副词when，where和why．如：
　　①I still remember the day on which （=when） I first came to school．我仍然记得初来学校的那一天．
　　②The factory in which （=where） I work is a large one．我工作的工厂是一个大厂子．