Question

16．Children in kindergarten are learning social skills．For this reason，it's important to tell the children what will make them become good citizens when they grow up．It's up to parents，teachers and all others involved with a kid to teach these skills．
Teaching kids to pick up things by themselves is a good way to teach them not to throw things on the ground．For example，if a class has to make paper cutouts （剪下的图样），after cutting，have the children pick up the wastepaper and place it in the wastebasket．
The golden rule of good citizenship should be taught at this age．The rule is"One should treat others as one would like others to treat oneself"．Teachers should ask their students how they want to be treated．There are many answers，such as not being treated in bad manners．The teacher should explain that others don't like to be scared，so you should not scare others either．
Following the laws is good citizenship．Proper games can be played in the classroom．Games have rules，and all students in the class should follow the rules of the games．If a child doesn't want to follow，it is up to the teacher to explain them to the child．Teaching children about following rules should help them understand the need t
o obey the law when they become adults．
【写作内容】
1． 以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点；
2． 不少城市在创建文明城市．请以约120个词谈我们如何成为文明市民．
内容包括：
（1）你认为文明市民 （a civilized citizen） 应具备什么素质，列举两三种文明行为；
（2）作为中学生，谈谈你应如何从小事做起，为创建文明城市作贡献．
【写作要求】
1．可以使用实例来支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens．
作者指出，教导孩子成为优秀公民的技巧是很重要的．
高分句型二：
As a senior high school student，I will do what I can to become a civilized citizen in my daily life．
作为一个高中生，我将尽我所能成为我日常生活中的文明市民．

解答 The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens（高分句型一）．Therefore，he suggests teaching children to pick up things by themselves，to respect others and follow the laws．
As far as I am concerned，a civilized citizen is supposed to respect others．In public places，such as restaurants，stations or hospitals，a civilized citizen would not speak or talk loudly．Besides，a civilized citizen ought to be always ready to reach out their helping hands．Last but not the least，a civilized citizen should be aware of the significance of obeying the law．
As a senior high school student，I will do what I can to become a civilized citizen in my daily life（高分句型二）．For example，I will pick up rubbish on the ground and put it into the dustbin．On my way to school，I will follow the traffic rules．All in all，I will do what I am expected to do．Only in this way can we make our hometown a more comfortable place for all of us to live in．

点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．