Question

15．Many Chinese students have studied English for approximately ten years，but most of them cannot even speak English correctly or fluently．In my opinion，there are several obstacles that have caused this to happen．The main obstacle is fear!Another is the habit of mentally translating from Chinese to English and then to change these thoughts into spoken words and sentences．Many of these difficulties are caused by the way Chinese people study and learn the language．
We must learn to speak as a child does．When we are learning a second language we need to remember how we learned our native language．Learning to understand and speak a language is one of the first skills a child develops．How does a child learn the language？He listens for a time and then he tries to repeat the words．Parents give great praise for the smallest effort and slightest improvement．Therefore，the child develops courage and is excited about learning．It takes a long time before he knows anything about grammar，spelling or formal sentence structures．
As for language teachers，they should avoid criticism and be very encouraging and generous with praise．Criticism or pointing out faults too often causes students to lose self-confidence and develop a fear of speaking．The best way to motivate a student is using praise．
The most important aspect of speaking is having good self-esteem．Self-esteem is how you feel about yourself．When most Chinese people are asked how their English is，or they are told their English is very good，they immediately respond by saying，"Oh my English is very poor．"If you say this to yourself often enough，you will believe it．When someone compliments（称赞）you，just say"thank you"．
Caused by their fear and way of learning，many Chinese students cannot speak English fluently even after ten-years'learning．（要点1）Actually we should learn to speak English as a child learns his native language by listening and repeating a lot．（要点2）And teachers should praise and encourage rather than criticize students，just as parents do．（要点3）Finally，having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English..（要点4）．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Caused by their fear and way of learning，many Chinese students cannot speak English fluently even after ten-years'learning
他们的恐惧和学习方式造成的，很多中国学生不能流利地说英语，即使经过十年的学习．
高分句型二：
Finally，having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English．
最后，拥有良好的自尊对于讲英语是十分重要的．

解答 Caused by their fear and way of learning，many Chinese students cannot speak English fluently even after ten-years'learning（高分句型一）．（要点1）Actually we should learn to speak English as a child learns his native language by listening and repeating a lot．（要点2）And teachers should praise and encourage rather than criticize students，just as parents do．（要点3）Finally，having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English（高分句型二）..（要点4）

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．