Question

假如你是深圳大运会(the 26^th Universiade)志愿者李华，您的英国朋友Bob即将来深圳旅游，应他的要求，请您写一封e-mail，介绍深圳湾体育中心(Shenzhen Bay Sports Center)——“春茧”(the Spring Cocoon)。

 

 

[写作内容]

位置	深圳市南山中心区东北角，毗邻香港
开工---竣工时间	2008年10月---2010年底
结构：	建筑面积约32.6万平方米。包括体育场、体育馆、游泳馆(natatorium)和星级酒店
用途	第26届大运会开幕式和足球赛、乒乓球赛、游泳等比赛和训练。大运会后免费向市民开放。
特点	深圳的新地标(landmark)，代表了深圳市的城市形象
“春茧”的寓意	优秀青年运动员冲向世界“破茧而出”

[写作要求]

1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 注意：信的开头和结尾已给出。

 

Dear Bob,

I was so glad to hear that you are coming to Shenzhen for a travel.    _______________________________________________________________________________

SincerelyYours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

参考范文

Dear Bob,

I was so glad to hear that you are coming to Shenzhen for a travel.

Shenzhen Bay Sports Center, nicknamed as the “Spring Cocoon” because of its shape of a cocoon, is located at the northeast corner of the center of Nanshan District, Shenzhen and next to Hong Kong. Covering an area of 326,000 square metres, it includes a stadium, a gym, a natatorium and some star hotels. Its construction work started in October 2008 and came to an end at the end of 2010. It was in the Spring Cocoon that the opening ceremony of 26^th Universiade was held as well as the training and competitions for football , pingpong ball, swimming and so on and after the Universiade it will be open to the public. As a new landmark representing the image of Shenzhen City, it means that excellent young athletes rush out of the cocoon and into the world.

SincerelyYours,

Li Hua

【解析】【写作点拨】

1.这是一篇介绍深圳湾体育中心是一篇典型的说明文，时态以一般现在时态为主，其它时态为辅；

2.在表达时注意专有名词的大写、时间、位置、面积的表达，不要混淆体育场和体育馆的英语名称的写法；

3.为表达较复杂，可适当使用分词短语作状语或定语、强调句等复杂结构。