Question

最近，你校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。主题是：要不要集中进行晚自习。根据下图提供的信息，写一篇150字左右的英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，注意要涵盖所有要点。

Answer 1

Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not. Here is the result according to the survey.
60 percent of the students think it’s a good idea to have the evening self-study at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates.
There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home. They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone.
At the same time, still 15 percent of the students don’t have a clear answer to the question. They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if they are asked to, but they promise they can also do well at home.

试题分析：考查数据分析类型短文写作。要求考生根据所给数据筛选出文章的要点，再转换成英语。本题在写作的时候要注意百分数的表达法，不要出现中国式的英语表达。在组织要点的时候，仍然要注意使用多种句式如强调句，倒装句等让文章充满了变化。在发表个人观点的时候也要注意使用谚语，让文章更为地道，有英语的味道。
点评：本文属于图表题的一种，要求考生根据图表，筛选出要点。注意分数百分数的表达法，在本文的写作中，尽量避免出现中国式英语的句式，要灵活运用各种倒装句，强调句等方式，让文章充满变化。